Anqurva'del/*More Ephael History*

**Veshel** · Feb 7th, 2003, 08:22:02

(( I toned my story down and posted it on the VN boards for AO under Roleplaying,

I used them for my EQ stuff so I figured why not for his piece. This is first draft>

Post is under Xynteiri > Anqurva'del,

Just select RP board from this link>

http://vnboards.ign.com/default.asp?cat=5042 ))

**Arila** · Feb 7th, 2003, 12:25:01

Read it over, it looks good for a first version

I cant see why u think its unfit to be posted on these boards, not seen anything that could be seen as offencive, at least, not to me

Keep it up, cause i want to read more

**Veshel** · Feb 7th, 2003, 15:10:25

Thanks Arila,

Yes indeed it has a way to go. I am one of these people who can't proof or edit well after I slop something down. I am blind to my mistakes.

I have to stay away for abit and then return to it. It is too compressed, besides the typos :P, it needs to be twice its current size.

**Arila** · Feb 7th, 2003, 23:16:38

How large will your story be? mine is currently at 46 pages in MS word

Not that its good at all

keep it up!

**Arila** · Feb 8th, 2003, 21:24:11

Ive added her story to my site, its a bit easier to get access to

U can find it here:
http://www.icc-central.net/story/ephael/page.asp

*Note: It may be a bit "rough" for some

Now...

Where are all the others?

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