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(( I toned my story down and posted it on the VN boards for AO under Roleplaying,
I used them for my EQ stuff so I figured why not for his piece. This is first draft>
Post is under Xynteiri > Anqurva'del,
Just select RP board from this link>
http://vnboards.ign.com/default.asp?cat=5042 ))
Read it over, it looks good for a first version :)
I cant see why u think its unfit to be posted on these boards, not seen anything that could be seen as offencive, at least, not to me :)
Keep it up, cause i want to read more :)
Thanks Arila,
Yes indeed it has a way to go. I am one of these people who can't proof or edit well after I slop something down. I am blind to my mistakes.
I have to stay away for abit and then return to it. It is too compressed, besides the typos :P, it needs to be twice its current size.
How large will your story be? mine is currently at 46 pages in MS word :)
Not that its good at all :p
keep it up!
Ive added her story to my site, its a bit easier to get access to :)
U can find it here:
http://www.icc-central.net/story/ephael/page.asp
*Note: It may be a bit "rough" for some :)
Now...
Where are all the others? :p