Stare at the suns : Fiction

[Lilyflie]

Well,. following the lead of many I have started to write my backstory. Just a few things to mention first.

1. I am by no means a writer and I expect there will be people who read it and go....um...yup..she's not a writer

2. I expect that my knowledge of rubi-ka history is still a little weak and it is quite possible I am completly wrong in my way of interpreting how things are done. This was just what I came up with given the information I had, and filling in some blanks a long the way

3. The story is ongoing with part 3 actually being role played in the game. Part 2 will be posted soon and if anyone would like to play a role in the story, please let me know, and I'll try to include you...in the backstory and in the present story. everyone is welcome, but not everyone will be included.

4. I will edit this as I learn what information needs to be fixed in order for it to make sense in the play world.

I hope you enjoy...feel free to post comments below

http://members.shaw.ca/nomatter/ao/backstory.html

[Arila]

Cool story!

All these stories makes me wonder if i should upload my own at some point

[_________Crazynotion]

I do like it. Trechery, betrayal, nastiness, confusion, tears and hope all rolled into one!

Yay!

And yes, everyone post fiction! Fan fiction is good!

As for 'legitimacy' - I wouldn't worry overmuch. It's a good story, and it doesn't have any inconsistencies that I noticed. Ragnar may notice some, but he's got the advantage of having a teensy bit more knowledge of the setting

[Lilyflie]

For those of who who enjoyed part one of my story, I have posted part 2 now on my site. Please use the same link as in the first post to see it and post comments below. The same disclaimer applies.

Would love to get a little more feedback this time around. I am really trying to improve as a writer. If you don't want top post them, please send me a e-mail to jesskabar@hotmail.com with "your story" in the subject line.

Thanks, happy reading (*gulp* I hope)
;D

[______________Barlau]

(ooc: What a terrific story! I thoroughly enjoyed it
Whatever made you post a disclaimer that you couldn't write?)

*bump*

KB

[Lilyflie]

*blush*

"Whatever made you post a disclaimer that you couldn't write?"

I dunno.....cause I had never done it before

*blush*

*blush*

thank you

[______________Barlau]

(ooc: I finished part 2, what a GREAT story I look forward to the rest...

I'm assuming, if there really is a PC, John Rm, that he's a close friend of yours. If he likes to roleplay, perhaps you might get him to write a story, too? I'd love to hear his view on events )

KB

[Lilyflie]

Actually, every person in the stories (mom, sister, Danzii, John "blackswords" Rm) is in the game in one form or another. Blacks is kinda letting me have a free go with this story. The stuff you read was backstory to things that actually did happen in game. Part 3 and 4 are going to be actual accounts of what happened in game. Actually....we're playing out part 5 as I type this

I'll start writing part 3 this week. really gald you enjoyed it