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    Love Kills (Short new Sad Poem by Engelen)

    Love Kills(Another Angel)

    New short poem by Engelen! (Something to still the interested while I`m pondering on the next big one. While it may not be directly connected to any events or characters, I still felt it very naturally in the world our toons live in)


    She ran out the door with tears in her eyes
    Back inside sat her boyfriend with a lover in his bed
    All this time, all this love had just been lies
    Her heart broke down and she wished she was dead

    Out on the streets in Trade and down to the grid
    The rain was falling like the angels were crying
    She would never forget what he did
    and deep inside she started dying

    People ran for shelter while she ran away
    She activated the grid with a shaking hand
    Nobody was left to make her stay
    Nobody would care or understand

    She came to Lush Resort and passed the crowd
    The guards came rushing to calm them down
    But the people started shouting nervous and loud
    As she woke up the little Omni Town

    She climbed up on the lift and rode it to top
    stepped on the ledge and whispered goodbye
    The crowd gathered below and shouted Stop
    But she couldnt live like this, she had to die

    "Wait! Stop! DONT DO IT!" The guards cried
    as they ran towards the ledge she stood
    It didnt matter, she had already died
    The second she finally understood

    She closed her eyes and took a breath
    Stepped backward until she fell to the concrete
    It wasnt the fall that was her death
    It was he who stopped her heartbeat

    Omni-Pol never solved the case
    Omni-Med sorrowed over the young dead girl
    That the heartbroken girl was in a much better place
    Than this heartless brutal world
    I'm a runaway train on a broken track,
    I'm a ticker on a bomb that you can't turn back this time,
    that's right, I got away with it all and I'm still alive

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    How sad
    The fog crept in on little cat's feet, while the night spread over the city like a patient etherized upon a table.

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    Good poem

    Such a sad end to potentially good life.
    wonders what the boy did to her

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    Unhappy

    A touching poem, thanks Engelen.
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    Thanks! I wasnt quite sure about it, but I`m really glad you liked it. I am thinking about making a grand poem about a world war between Omni and Clan, but I need some time I think to come up with the main line.
    I'm a runaway train on a broken track,
    I'm a ticker on a bomb that you can't turn back this time,
    that's right, I got away with it all and I'm still alive

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    its a very sad poem. i feel very very sorry for her
    jeepers

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