I wanted to try something a bit different this time....
Some of the nanotechnician nanos such as "Izgimmer's Mockery", "Enfraam's perfected fortification", "Izgimmer's Living Codex" and "Enfraam's Toolkit" tell bits and pieces of a story of sorts, yet we're left with a sense of longing, wanting to know these characters a bit better.
The description of "Izgimmer's Living Codex" implies a relationship of sorts between the famous metaphysicist Sarah Mocham (mokiez) and Nanotechnician Mehar Izgimmer.
Why not lovers? After all, Mocham would have to be pretty close to Izgimmer for anyone to even think that Izgimmer would entrust his own Nanoprogramming libraries to Mocham.
And mocham's gift? Hmm, I wonder who gave her those gifts? *grins*
Keep in mind a few things:
Metaphysicists ARE nanotechnicians. Spiritual nanotechnicians, so it made sense to have both Sarah and Mehar come from common grounds, i.e. Nano-Technicians...
If it sucks, tell me it sucks. Although I've written a few stories in rl, I don't think I've ever written a serious tale on these boards and it's hard to cram and compress a full story into limited space, even with multiple chapters. So much begs to be written that, to me, the story feels truncated and slighted. I'm hoping you won't be as critical as I am...
And yes, this story will continue.