Ok, some time ago then i psoted some stuff from a story ive been working on, also had chapter 1 on my site for long, still, made a few changes to the story now, and well...
If you want to read it then use the link, if you, then go there anyway ?
http://www.icc-central.net/dawn_of_fate/page.asp
If anyone got some constructive feedback then elave a msg. My spelling aint 100%, but its ok.
