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  1. #1

    Poem

    I felt like writing this, and it seemd as good a place to put it as any....feel free to comment where you may..

    And though it may be late
    when you see the rising sun
    I know now right here in my heart
    my winter's just begun!

    Cold and broken dead and frozen
    heartless from despair
    Heart is breaking lungs are aching
    breathing this arctic air!

    Locked in the embrace of winter
    heartless glitter
    shimmering flitter
    I dance upon the lake
    as hard as stone
    as cold as death
    I need fire to burn me
    A heart to turn me back
    I need a love to turn me back
    I need time to take me back!

    To where
    my soul lies in spring...
    General Hershel "Kasimir" Jurik

    President of Division 9 R.S.G.E

    Fixer
    RK-1

    Braumiester of the Pagan Bartenders, wielder of dual SSo8s

    Stealer of hearts, creds, and anything not nailed down!

  2. #2
    Very well done.... Beautifully written


    Luci "Jassel" Jurik

  3. #3
    Applaud, or ve vill have you shot...










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  4. #4
    Cristin!

    I love you sometimes you know that?

    Don't tell Eurus though or I'm a dead man.
    General Hershel "Kasimir" Jurik

    President of Division 9 R.S.G.E

    Fixer
    RK-1

    Braumiester of the Pagan Bartenders, wielder of dual SSo8s

    Stealer of hearts, creds, and anything not nailed down!

  5. #5

    Thumbs up

    Amazingly written and heart-felt, Boss... =)
    *Cuts to the cold static of an ended Grid-feed...*

    Division 9 RSGE

  6. #6
    Kas, yer a poet

    *pours some sake and raises her glass to him*

    Kampai, m'friend. May ya gift us with other words like these ones soon! *smiles*
    Jen Markarian - Put the weirdness back in Omni-Mining
    Updating my stories -- 19/03/08. Going slowly, but certainly
    Anarchy Reloaded - AO webcomics for the sake of being silly

    I never want to lose what I have finally found
    There's a requiem
    A new congregation
    And it's telling me: go forward and walk
    Under a brighter sky
    -- Delerium, Euphoria --

  7. #7
    Love it...

    *sigh*

    How sad another poet with a cold heart, I wrote this ages ago:

    "The discovery"
    by Juliet "Poetica" Capulet

    Freezing
    The desert is cold at night
    Thunderstorms
    Blizzards and thunder
    My hands trembling
    Yet the sand is still hot
    Feel it
    Soft and hot from the sun
    Flashing memories
    This is who I am
    This is what I am
    I am the desert
    At night
    I am a cold hart
    Filled with sun soaked sand
    Maybe spring is close
    Best regards Juliet Poetica Capulet (female solitus trader lvl195 - poet by heart, Oh Romeo, - who need Romeo?) Applicant of Ancarim Iron Legion

    "What makes the desert beautiful is that somewhere it hides a well." (Antoine de Saint-Exupéry)
    "Not all who wander are lost." (John Ronald Reuel Tolkien)
    "To Dare is to risk losing your foothold for a moment, Not to Dare is to risk losing yourself." (Søren Kierkegaard)

    Anaïs Manifestos Nin (female solitus mp lvl 171) Member of Ancarim Iron Legion
    Angel Heroess Heart (female solitus fixer lvl 102) Applicant of Ancarim Iron Legion
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  8. #8
    *hugs Poe* Every winter has its thaw..mine may have come this morning. I still expect a few more weeks of winter though.

    *toasts Demmy* You still are far better the writer my friend, but I'm grateful for the praise..acutally seeing as the you and Poe here are the best two writers I know on AO< you really made my day. *hugs* thanks guys.
    General Hershel "Kasimir" Jurik

    President of Division 9 R.S.G.E

    Fixer
    RK-1

    Braumiester of the Pagan Bartenders, wielder of dual SSo8s

    Stealer of hearts, creds, and anything not nailed down!

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